Hello readers. This is my Writer’s Toolbox piece of writing that I found most interesting this week. I hope you liked it and scroll down to see the picture and tell me if you think I’ve described it right to you. So this is what we had to do.
Describe this image to someone who CANNOT see it.
To make things tricky, the words ‘cat’, ‘couch’, and ‘grass’ are all banned today.
Oh, and include ONE Em-Dash Sentence to give your writing colour. Ready? Go.
My writing:
You’re looking into a room, and you wouldn’t call this a bedroom. It’s relatively small and rectangular, with a big glass sliding door on the left, grey curtains pulled aside. There is no carpet; there is only turf. Looking out from the glass door, there is a room similar to the one you’re currently inside, but you can only see a small corner of it and it somehow looks brighter. The walls and the ceiling are white, with black squares lined up around the ceiling and a grey line close to you on the wall. Near that grey line there is a nine-hole plug for something, and sitting right where the grey line sits a little kitten. It’s not a tabby—maybe a lighter coloured Tabby—but you’re just assuming for now it is one. It could also be a Ragdoll, too, but I think Tabby will do it.
In the middle of the room is an old sofa, the sides all tattered and rusty and dusty. The sofa faces towards the glass door and has 5 pillows on it, the pillows with casual patterns on it. A bit towards you is a glass coffee table with some old books on it, the glass so clean it makes the table seem invisible. There is a skinny stand lamp pointing towards the couch; it stands from the curtains at the end of the glass door, away from you. Where the lamp is, there is a grey concrete wall with a thin line in the middle. It doesn’t cover the whole end, but leaves a space that a person or two can go through. You can see a wooden wall further on, with a single light brightening up. There’s also a plug to the lamp, and you took a guess that the label on both lamps (the one near the curtain and this one) said ‘Made in China’.
But what bothers you most (back to the little tabby), from the corner of your eye, there is a reflection of this room too, but darker. You can only see a little bit of it though. This brings you to the end, and I think you’re probably wondering “Dark, main, bright?”. Tricky eh?
